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July 11, 2011
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I like the textures in the paint. I like the colors. I like how the red is the focus but balanced with the large white area. The rotation and crop of the red area balances the image. My eye starts at the hole in the chipped away paint, wonders around the image, is caught by the negative white space and works it's way back to the hole.
I really don't have anything negative to say. If I'm forced (this is a critique after all) I would say the medial line in the grey box breaks up the image for me a bit. I personally would have softened that in post. That's just me though.
Hope this critique helps. :)
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*KizukiTamura 4 days ago   Photographer
merci :blowkiss:
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~dajono Feb 14, 2013   Digital Artist
within reach
he thought as the
intervals seemed
to tighten around the
edges, tumbling down the

rusty velvet sea he was
overwhelmed by the pure
sensuality of life and the
echo of total silence
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Featured here: [link] *
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:iconjanrufelt:
Oh! Yeah! Love it!!! So simple and yet so strong!
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:icon149daei:
beautiful, cheers :beer:
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:iconhorstschmier:
Great co-work !!
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*birgzett Aug 3, 2011  Professional General Artist
this is so beautiful and poetic!
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*KizukiTamura Aug 3, 2011   Photographer
thank you :-)
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*birgzett Aug 3, 2011  Professional General Artist
you are so welcome!
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